Monday, May 30, 2011

Autumn



Autumn Leaves - Cameron

Golden, red and green
Old, crunchy and fragile
Windy and crackly
Spinning and whirling
Autumn is a red carpet showing an adventure to winter.

Autumn Leaves - Jessica

Red, golden, green
Wet, soft and brittle
Noisy, rustling and crunchy
Turning, dropping
Autumn is when the leaves fall from the trees.



Autumn Leaves - Olivia

Green, red orange and yellow
Crunchy and soft
Whistling, rustling and noisy
Whirling, turning and falling
Autumn is lots of stars falling down to the floor.



Autumn Leaves - Ben

Golden, orange and yellow
Crunchy, old and wet
Noisy, windy and crackly
Turn, tumble and fall
Autumn is a blanket of leaves for winter to sleep in.



Autumn Leaves - Stirling

Magenta, green and golden orange
Crunchy, brittle, rough and fragile
Rustling, noisy, whistling and crackling
Whirling, spinning, tumble turns
Autumn is colourful with bright colourful leaves.

2 comments:

  1. What awesome Autumn poems Room 5. I LOVE the describing words you have used! From Mrs O'Donnell

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  2. When the classroom clectd leves we made a fann with the leves i loved it the end goodby comment.

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